As with all the stories, please feel free to change details as needed with your class. This is another class-created story (this one created by 6th Graders).
This story has more details and more dialogue in it, which might make it more appropriate for older students who have had read or heard TPRS stories in the past.
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Hay un chico. Se llama Isaac. Isaac tiene 14 años y vive en Naboo. Isaac es pequeño, guapo, e inteligente. Isaac tiene un problema. Isaac no tiene pantalones nuevos. Isaac necesita pantalones nuevos. Isaac va a Target. Conoce a una chica en Target que se llama Sally.
Isaac le dice, “Hola ¿Cómo te llamas?”
Sally le responde, “Me llamo Sally. ¿Y tú?”
“Me llamo Isaac. Tengo un problema. Necesito pantalones nuevos. ¿Tienes pantalones aquí en Target?”
“No, lo siento. No tenemos pantalones en Target.”
Isaac está triste y enojado. ¡Necesita pantalones y Sally de Target no los tiene!
Isaac va a Dollar General. Conoce a un chico en Dollar General que se llama Elmo. Isaac le dice,
“Hola ¿Cómo te llamas?”
“Me llamo Elmo. ¿Y tú?”
“Me llamo Isaac. Tengo un problema. Necesito pantalones nuevos. ¿Tienes pantalones aquí en Dollar General?”
“No, lo siento. No tenemos pantalones en Dollar General.”
Isaac está triste y enojado. ¡Necesita pantalones y Elmo de Dollar General no los tiene!
Isaac va a Altamonte Mall. Conoce a una chica que se llama Nicole.
“Hola ¿Cómo te llamas?”
“Me llamo Nicole. ¿Y tú?
“Me llamo Isaac. Tengo un problema. Necesito pantalones nuevos. ¿Tienes pantalones aquí en Altamonte Mall?”
“¡Sí! Hay muchas tiendas con pantalones. Vamos a American Eagle.”
Isaac y Nicole van a American Eagle. ¡Hay pantalones! Isaac los compra y está muy feliz.
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In English
There’s a boy. His name is Isaac. Isaac is 14 years old and lives in Naboo. Isaac is small, handsome, and intelligent. Isaac has a problem. Isaac does not have new pants. Isaac needs new pants. Isaac goes to Target. Meet a girl at Target named Sally. Isaac says, “Hi, what’s your name?” Sally replies, “My name is Sally. And you?” “My name is Isaac. I have a problem. I need new pants. Do you have pants here at Target? ” “I’m not sorry. We do not have pants at Target. ” Isaac is sad and angry. You need pants and Sally from Target does not have them! Isaac goes to Dollar General. Meet a guy at Dollar General called Elmo. Isaac tells him, “Hello what’s your name?” “My name is Elmo. And you?” “My name is Isaac. I have a problem. I need new pants. Do you have pants here at Dollar General? ” “I’m not sorry. We do not have pants at Dollar General. ” Isaac is sad and angry. He needs pants and Dollar General Elmo does not have them! Isaac goes to Altamonte Mall. He meets a girl named Nicole. “Hello what’s your name?” “My name is Nicole. And you? “My name is Isaac. I have a problem. I need new pants. Do you have pants here at Altamonte Mall? ” “Yes! There are many shops with pants. We’re going to American Eagle. ” Isaac and Nicole go to American Eagle. There are pants! Isaac buys them and is very happy.